Part One of Two.
“Lay your armour down,” she smouldered, seductively fierce. Her eyes wicked. “You’re only delaying the inevitable.” She beckoned for him to approach with an impossibly long and powerful finger that came to a deadly point at the nail.
Lightning flashed, dazzling, momentarily illuminating the cavernous room. She was gone. “Inevitable.” Her sultry voice now came from the stairs. He turned with the deafening clap of thunder. She cackled soundlessly, terrifyingly, her bare finger outstretched, nay, thrust towards his quivering soul.
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“Nonsense Lucile, from the moment I first espied you I have thought of nothing else besides how stunning it should look upon your finger. And how stunning you should look wearing this promise of mine.”
“Oh
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“I am not the one whom you should blame, Lucile. You are so often out these days that you’ve made it terribly hard for me t-to, well, keep my… eyes from wandering.”
“Ian! What are you saying?”
“Where do you go, Luce? Where?”
“I’ve told you, with mother so sick I’ve got to carry out far more errands than before.”
“Do you know how long it’s been since…”
“Plus I’ve got to be up to date with all the journals for my studies.”
“We haven’t lain together as husband and wife for almost two months…”
“And my studies are ever so important to me.”
They stood silently for some time, a great distance between them.
“Luce?”
“What?” Not meeting his eyes.
“Where’s your wedding band?”
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“Warm yourself by the fire son, the morning will come soon. I’ll tell you stories of a better time, before we packed our bags and left all this…” he motioned down toward a valley and the glow of a small village, “…behind us in the dust. We had a place that we could call home and a life no one could touch.” He took a stick from the fire and delicately drew a name in the dirt.
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“I will not let you do this.” He got to his feet and once more took a step towards her.
“You’re stubborn and archaic. You don’t see the scope of all this.”
Blood seeped from long, thin cuts all over his face and arms.
“Your vile blood is leaking from you. Don’t you see this is futile? Now, lay your armour down.” His fingers hovered over the clasp that held a crude iron plate of body armour, which protected only his torso, in place. Her eyes widened; her mouth twisted into a menacing smile.
He then tightened it, and stared straight through her.
Fury. “Lay your armour down!”
He took another step in her direction, brandishing his sword.
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“I don’t mean to intrude,
“My rings are like beautiful mementos, my dearest Lucile. They to me represent something of extraordinary significance – the quashing of the distasteful and inferior.”
Lucile continued to stare at
“May I see yours?”
Lucile blushed and smoothed over the lap of her floral dress, “I don’t have one.”
“Bethany, I…”
“It’s of no consequence Lucile, don’t trouble yourself. Now, may I see it?”
She nodded and
3 comments:
i really enjoy your blog! keep working!
Is this the Lucy's Plight type assignment? Intriguingly nonlinear. I've got opinions on what I think's going to happen and who's fighting who... but I prefer to keep them to myself so when part 2 comes out I can lie, 'Yep, saw that coming'. :) You do ye olde world talk well, nay, very well.
My dear friend whom i shall name Ahlguien/Ahi, although i'm not sure if your comment was a one-off personalised piece of praise, I thank you for it. It was very nice to read.
Lucas, yes it is. The non-linearity of it was most likely (subconsciously inspired by my watching Mulholland Drive recently). Nay, it is thou who commands the diction of the past-times! :)
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