6/18/2010

Poetry Corner

Some poems from my 'Making It Strange' poetry class.

The branches.

The branches here
Don’t sway too much.
The mud is thick and everywhere
You can only dance for so long
Until the children-minded close in
With their tiny jars like mini-chasms
Or the staid contradict their great fight
With their division of freedom.
There are no pass-outs
You can’t shake them
You just have to wait;
Wait and hope for the sway.


Heather

You craft drawings of foreign inspiration
A few deft lines and a person is there,
Emoting
Do they speak to you?

I see you with your chickens
The ones you couldn’t part with from science
Do they nuzzle into you?

You ice skate but I’ve never seen you do it
Can you double axle?

You don’t drive.

You’re just over the fence
But there’s more than just one between us.
Is it of your creation or mine?

I think you’re lonely.
Is that ok?


Title


Italic in style

Bold in spirit

Entitled to your attention

A bad idea

I’m over here…


Distanced.

1 comment:

Luke Davidson said...

As an authority on poetry, I'd say Heather is my favourite. Title is cute and playful. The branches is unsettling for some reason - I like it's ending loop back to the start. It reminded me of some lyrics by 'Live'.