3/16/2010

A Description of a Place

As the light slowly died, all of the sounds around me steadily grew in volume – the murmur of restaurant chatter, the clinking of glasses and crockery, the cracking of peanut shells – but it was the waves washing into shore and the buzzing of tropical insects that most cultivated the feel of the atmosphere. When I closed my eyes it was easy to believe I was lost in paradise, which wasn’t too far from the truth.

In reality I was sitting at a friendly open-air restaurant up the hill from a resort, my appetite recently sated by one of the less spicy traditional dishes on offer, trying to soak everything in. This would be the last time I’d ever experience these sights, sounds and feelings, so I attempted to imprint them all into my memory.

The small beach that the restaurant overlooked was like a virtual postcard – waves lapped gently against the shore, a light breeze fluttered the fronds of palm trees, and the sun left no shadow unstretched as it sank out at sea. It was a beautifully deceptive beach. When the tide withdrew during the day a swim became somewhat less appealing. To get to the water you’d have to navigate across fifty or so metres of slippery rocks, sharp rocks, and broken shells. Of course if you just wanted to bask in the sun, then there was no problem!

It seemed about thirty or forty steep metres down to the beach from the wooden table where I sat. I leant back on my chair and peered over the edge of the concrete foundation. The steps that snaked up the side of the hill led down to the thatch-work rooves of the beachside massage and hair braiding huts. A bit farther down I could just make out where the steps reached the sand of the private beach, and the narrow river that I’d jumped over to get here.

Raising my sightline I was once again struck by the wonderment of the mountains of tropical rainforest. The trees were impossibly tall and stood in an ocean of green; the rainforest was so dense and always looked so fresh, as if every leaf of every tree had a perpetual source of morning dew. I wondered about the wildlife that the forests protected from human touch.

A small lantern flickered on next to the table. The sun was still painting the clouds orange and pink, but was on its final legs. I took a deep breath and savoured the humidity I now knew well.

I finished the last of my unusual looking can of coke and stood, inspired by the beauty of the world and wanting to see so much more. It was then that I saw the Schwarzenegger of mosquitoes begin hovering laboriously in my direction, and I had to commit another sound to memory – the loud clopping of my thongs as they pounded down the stairs to safety.

3 comments:

Luke Davidson said...

Sounds very Thailand-y. So job well done. Unless it's some Wantirna beach I don't know about... in which case, not such a great job. :P

Writing that much description of a place would be torture for me! Although I guess you kind of cheat by putting your thoughts at the time into it (which I like as I think that much straight description could get boring).

Only thing I wasn't sure about... I can't really imagine someone running from mozzies, but then I guess someone like you might. :p (I did find Schwarzengger of mosquitoes funny, although if this is a uni thing, I wonder what they'd say about it, tone-wise. I guess it fits in with the relaxed feel. Meh, I liked it. So that's all that matters!) :)

PS. Yay for new entry! (even if it's uni work).

Jimzip said...

Haha, so *is* it uni work? ;) Yeah either way it's very nice to read!

Hehe, I liked how the image of the serene paradise is broken by the mosquitoes suddenly. The entry almost becomes a parody of itself because you then bolt down the stairs away from it all. You say how lovely it all is, then you're escaping it. X)

More entries D-Town! ;)

Jimzip :D

Dale said...

Haha it is indeed uni work. I was wanting to make a comment about what it is that makes a place 'perfect' depends on the person who's experiencing it. Mosquitoes don't really bother me that much! But don't tell my tutor as this is supposed to be a creative non-fiction piece. ;)

Thanks for the comments.

D-town out!